Monday, May 3, 2010

Pitch for "Oh my God!"

My story "Oh my God!" is recommended for people 12 and up. It is about a boy named John. His brother,Jason has been shot. John swore he would get revenge. He has 3 suspects: Brad{his friend on weed, a drug}, Chris{his enemy}, and for some reason his girlfriend, Suzie. He secretly spies on each of his suspects.........Mostly his girlfriend.{wolf whistle}.His friend is acting more crazy than usual. Chris is hiding something as usual.




I'M SUSPICIOUS

Wednesday, January 20, 2010

PRISON (ASSAULTS)

!WARNING! THIS IS NOT FOR PEOPLE UNDER THE AGE OF 11!!!!!!!

Wassup! I`m about to tell you about prisons. People go to prisons for many reasons but my reason is ASSAULTS. In case you don`t know assaults are when someone attacks you and steals your items or kills you or just hurts you.

When someone gets assaulted they get robbed. They also get killed for their items. Some people even get _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ assaulted. Also here are many kinds of assaults. One is _ _ _ _ _ _
assaults, another is thievery assaults,etc. There are innocent people who assault others.

1. May I interview you for my feature article? Why or why not?

A:Yes, because you`re my son!

2. Did you like the job of being a police man? Why or why not?

A: Yes, even though it was dangerous I got the money to take care of me and my family.

3. Is there a time you when something crazy happened?

A: Yes.

4. If so, name one.

A: I lost a 20$ bill. Either that or someone stole it.

5. If not do you have a friend who it happened to?

A: Funny you mention it. He got smacked by a girl for trying to get her #.

6. Where you continuing a job tradition? If so, how many people were police man or women before you?

A; Yes, and there were 5 policemen before me.

7. Did you ever think this job was a piece of garbage?

A: Yes, because of the danger.

8. Why did you choose this job over another?

A: I chose this job over another because I needed $ and this was the job with the highest pay.

9. Do you think that was the best job in the world? Why or why not?

A: No, because there are better jobs we might not be sure of.

10. Did you enjoy my interview? Why or why not?

A: Yes, because I got to spend time with my son.

Interviewer: Luis Taveras

Person being interviewed: Miguel Taveras

Friday, November 20, 2009

Questions for my feature article interviews

1. May I interview you for my feature articles? Why or why not?

2. Do you like the job you have/had as a police person? Why or why not?

3.Is there a time you had before that was crazy?

4.If so name one.

5.If not, do you have a friend that it happened to?

6.Are you continuing a job tadition?

7. Did you ever think this job was a piece of garbage?

8. Why did you choose this job over another?

9. Do you think this is the best job in the world? Why or why not?

10. Did you enjoy the interview? Why or why not?

Wednesday, November 18, 2009

homophones poem

I took their skateboard

and ran over there.

I ran by my neighbor`s

and they said `bye`.

`I ran past your mom fool!`

I yelled at them.

`YOU`RE DEAD,KID!`

they yelled at me.

Friday, November 13, 2009

Who can I interview and where can I find information?

If I can interview someone to get information on assaults I would interview a police man. I would interview a police man because he/she might know why certain people went to prison. Plus someone can be there for assaulting someone and the police will definitely know. I would also interview my dad for information on assaults. I would interview my dad too because he used to be a police man. He used to take people them to court when he BUSTED them.

I found this info at:en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Assault

Fact 1:someone _ _ _ _ _ _ _ assaulted a moman in an elevator at 3:29 A.M.

Fact 2:that same person _ _ _ _ _ _ _ assaulted another woman in a dark alley in Amsterdam.

I found these 2 facts on the man`s wanted poster.

Monday, November 9, 2009

Subject-verb Agreement

Most of the time that I go to major events crazy things happen. For example:when I went to a baseball game with my dad and people went crazy to get the ball. Plus,once someone fell when they caught the ball. Also I saw that some people get wrestlers thrown on them when they go to see wrestling. Also people got sad. Like when Ric Flair had to retire at Wrestle Mania XXV.But people can also be happy. Like when Edge lost his title to the Undertaker at Wrestle Mania XXIV, or when John Cena won his first title.